Tuesday, 30 April 2013

Memories

"Where is this place? I am surrounded by.. blood? Everything, is turning black..."
I woke up to find myself in a big, white room lying on a bed.
"Hey, where am I? Who am I? Hey, is anyone there?"

A few seconds later, a man and a woman in white followed by another man and a women in white and blue entered the room. The two people in white and blue ran towards me, asking me what had happened.
"Hey, who are you? Who am I?"
They looked scared but they soon replied saying they were my 'parents' and that my name was Sae.

The people in white then started talking to my 'parents'. I felt really sleepy, and then everything turned black.
I was asleep for a long time, at least it felt like it was. I was in a dream, where I was sitting on a cold floor of a completely black coloured room, although I could still see myself.

In the black room, there were no windows. Just one single door that was bolted and chained all over. All of a sudden, the bolts and chains fell off with a thud. The door creaked open, and a blood-stained hand appeared within the small crack of the door and the wall.

"Who.... who are you? Don't come near me!"  I scrambled to a corner and looked around. The room was no longer completely black. It was filled with a white, blood-stained table, an opened box of blood-stained equipment and the floor, the most scary thing of all... was sticky with a red liquid just like fresh blood, all over. Then, a strange, blood-stained man walked towards me with a kitchen knife...

I started to scream non-stop, when I was forced to wake up by a person in white. She was asking me if I was okay.
"I was so scared!"
I started crying. That was when i realised how I was in a white room. When I was in my dream, sitting on the floor in that black room, I heard people talking, a man and a woman. They kept saying "Sae.... Sae..".

So I realised they were talking about me. What I heard was:
"Sae, that girl... we cannot let her escape again. She is an extremely important person that we have to kill."

After hearing that, I started to plan my escape. There was a open window where the surroundings looked near the ground and the city was near by. I then realised that I was covered in blood. That day, when everyone had gone out, I leaped out of the window and onto the ground.

I ran towards the city, looking for the police station for help. They all gasped at me, as soon as I entered. I told them what had happened and one person started to call some people. A few minutes later, a woman and a man came rushing into the police station. I had a feeling that somehow, they were familiar. I knew them.

"Are you my parents?"

They said they were, and I started to remember everything that had happened including my memories. The next day, the people in my dream had been caught and sent to jail. I am so glad I got my memories back.

The End :)

5 comments:

  1. Nice story! I'm looking forward to what you will write next.: ) thumbs up too. (^O^) but I find the story ending abit too rushed. It'll be better if you lengthen abit. Example from the part " Are you my parents? " maybe you can say that when the girl step in the police station one of the female looked at her and I find her familiar but I can't really remember exactly who she is . Maybe roughly include how the lady look like would be better :) and then as she approach her she started to get " a confused feeling" she started to panic and her eyes started to look red and tears rolled down her cheeks..... when that lady carress that girl head she suddenly felt much more relax and then as time pas
    s by the girl slowly remembered her memories. :) . You may want to include those kind hearted and actions that the lady and that man claimed that they are her parents would do. ... and then slowy she remembered her memories. Viola ! It's abit long winded though. It's just my opinion 0^◇^0)/ I also used to write stories... but I gave up cause I find my stories too long and I'm always stuck at the exciting part that cause me to drag that part until the whole story is mess up :/ haha. But I love describing the look of the person when I'm writing stories, I will never miss that out. :)) so yea.. hope you'll continue to write more and Good luck on your exams!

    Cheers,
    YuJun

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    1. Ouh yeah. Theres a continuation, but it sort of changed while i was writing it. :l so yeah, another story of Sae :D

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